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.:SF OCT:. Page 23

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:pointl:|Page 22|<--->|End of Act II Filler|:pointr:

Character References
Salem
Sisiri
Biaxident
Dercas

And with that, we end my Round 1 entry! :la: Had a lot of fun writing this out~ I wish I could've drawn the rest, but time wasn't on my side this time. I think my writing has improved a bit since the last time. Sounds better to me now. :)

Now you may be thinking that Sisiri's poison from the thorns would be killing Biaxident. Thing is, it pierced through her skin, meaning only a little bit got in. If it didn't pierce through her, then she would be in trouble. Of course, who is to say it's enough to kill her eventually? The ending is open-ended. Biaxident could be alive in the path, or she could be dying from her injuries. Your choice.
There was going to be epilogue, but I think I'll save it for another time. No filler page either. If I move on, I'll make one. If not, oh well~

It was a lot of fun writing Biaxident. She's such an interesting character with an interesting backstory~ It was fun to have ~Tzaryn as an opponent :dummy: The similarities and differences our characters had lead to an interesting first round for me. Thank you so much for being my opponent ~Tzaryn! :D Check out her awesome Round 1 here! Have a good read~


Salem and Sisiri © ~Fulishagirl
Biaxident © ~Tzaryn
Dercas © ~FantasyDemonAngel
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You're writing is quite good and I enjoyed this a lot. For the most part, you wrote Biaxident really well. There were a couple of things that seemed slightly off, but it was nothing major.  I thought you did an excellent job balancing her intelligence with her naivete/dumbness. That's a really important part to how she works, and you were spot on with that.

This has been my favorite page thus far. I really liked the part with Sisri. I was very touched by that scene.

Once again, thanks for being a great opponent. It's my first OCT, so it was wonderful to have a tough opponent that was really invested in their entry! I wish we could both move on because Salem and Sisiri are great characters. I think I'm going to be sad however the results shake out. Good luck to you! :)